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 The Sailing Experience   It was extreme madness, kayaking, rowboats, and sailing, all on that magnificent experience. As my buddy and I straight away chose a banana boat to use. The boat was bright yellow. The brightest boat I have ever seen. Boat after boat went out, the gushing pink one first then the three bright blue ones, after of course the gorgeous banana boat.

Mr Jones special helper Ken helped us so we would know what to do. Koda hopped in carefully and I did straight away. As I pushed away the rudder and pulled it towards me, Koda worked the sail. The very kindly sailing instructor Mr Jones told us to go around the yellow buoys. Well that was pretty easy. Do this do that thank you for your help Mr Jones you made me successful. Back and forward over and over again.    The rowboats were hard so Koda and I were going to go extremely fast. The pink boat was catching up “Come on banana boat faster faster” Koda and I explained to the boat we had. Nearly at the end there was extreme waves and wind”Wooap’’went the whistle“One more around then back” said Mr Jones. While we went back there was no wind! So we went slowly to the rocky shore where every one complained because they had to go home.  

Narritive

“We have to do it in bare feet then,” answers coach. “Oh,” says Jack and the team,” “You can do it Jack,” says Nathan, in a nice way. As the team starts they realise they spot the nasty Zac’s team. “Ouch,” says Jack, “This hurts hitting the ball with bare feet”. Zac’s team is winning by a long shot and it is five minutes to the end of the game. This is a critical moment for Jack’s team there acting like a bowl of fish without any water. The sobbing boys cry off the field because the score was 15-0 to them. WOW! Zac is filled with laughter, because Jack is sprinting away like a bird getting attacked. Nathan aka his friend runs after Jack. Zac is still laughing. Nathan has done a massive miracle, he has cheered Jack up and found out that Zac cheated. Jacks luck has just started, they have been given a rematch and Jack’s team won.
 * “ ** Ok team we will beat that nasty team, Jack go get those soccer shoes,” says coach. When Jack was going into the shed he spotted Zac coming out. Jack thought something suspicious was going on. Jack saw that the boots weren’t there. “Hey coach the boots aren’t there,” said Jack