Samantha

SAILING EXPERIENCE Looking around with flashes of light beaming at me on the crystal clear sparkling water, so clear that I can see the bottom of the ocean floor. I am eagerly waiting on the jagged sharp rocks on shore for the zippy inflatable’s to go out. Finally we got the all clear centerboard and rudder down. Check. Off I go. With a gust of wind I shot as fast as a flash of lightning out to the big bouncy yellow buoy that bobbed on top of the crystal clear surface. Wheeeee. I was tilting so far to the side that water was coming in, washing in and out of the sunshine like optimist. Coming up to the big bouncy yellow buoy surrounded  by baby ripples. Whoosh around I go. Aiming at the second yellow bouncy buoy close to the pointy sharp shore. Dam it! The aching whistle blows so I have to go in shore. Slowly I putt into land. “Quick jump out”, I  rapidly said to myself. I hopped out just in time before it ran aground.

We got the flash trailers and dragged the trailer and optimist up the bumpy, rocky hill. We had to spray down the optimists to get the yucky salt water off. When the day ended I whispered to myself, “I will do that again”.

THE MOMENT WHEN….. The moment when….Thawck! My face was in danger as it puffed up like big cotton Ball. I zoomed down the curved yellow slide. All of a sudden wack! By a bony knee of a boy. He crossed by jumping across the yellow slide and hit my fragile cheek. Balling my eyes out majorly as I waddled over to the brick hall when I was stable. Slowly putting the freezing cold square ice pack on my puff ball face. Mrs Broughton  Came along and started blabbering off about this gigantic pikelet she made. I have to admit it was big! In the process of the bruise it did all the fascinating colours of the rainbow. By Samantha  Written by Samantha This is a descriptive piece of writing that i wrote in class. I learnt how to make all of my ideas into a small paragraph.